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Deviousness `TimberClipse's dedication to our community is without question. From developing helpful tutorials, to being a community leader in groups such as #fella and #deviant365, you can always find Zev connecting with all areas of our community in order to spread his infectious enthusiasm and inspiring positivity. We are delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2012 to `TimberClipse, congratulations! Read More
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And my biggest thanks go to people who gave me interesting suggestion and critique.
Feedbacks are always useful to grow up.
This work of mine is a little bit old, and looking at it after time passed, I've had the same impressions as you...it can be done better!
But in my mind the concept idea is still nice!
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1.) Get rid of that JPEG compression. Either save the file as large as possible/as high-quality as possible, or try going to PNG format. Part of the fun of vectors is the clean, crisp lines. The compression along the edges on this piece makes it look mucky.
2.) Watch the composition. The right side reads fine, but the finger doesn't read as well. It looks like a blob. Part of the problem is how close the the left side of the image the finger is: the negative space doesn't look good. Also, the way the finger runs off the page on a diagonal to the lower left corner draws your eyes down and off the image. Personally, I'd add some more negative space to the left of the image and also tilt the finger at an angle away from the lips to enhance the sense of motion, that she's pulling her finger away from her lips.
3.) Text. I like how it's coming out of her mouth like that, and the Tasty part comes across clearly. The "v" in vectors is pretty squished, though. You might want to play around with the text shape a bit more.
Hope that gives you some ideas for revamping and/or for future vectors.
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Nicely done!
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thats exactly what happened to me too